The Sydney Morning Herald said "from a purely literary standpoint, the book scarcely calls for criticism, but for renders of a certain type it will doubtless have its own sentimental appeal."[8]
The Labor Daily said it "must enhance the reputation of the popular author."[9]
The Sydney Mail said "The reader will meet some old friends from The Broken Melody in the new novel, and may very well enjoy this renewal of acquaintanceship. The Melody Lingers is quite up to the standard of this author's earlier novels."[10]
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^"Four Thwaites Novels To Be Reprinted". News. Vol. XXIX, no. 4, 399. South Australia. 28 August 1937. p. 5. Retrieved 9 March 2024 – via National Library of Australia.
^"SWITCHGIRL'S FOLLIES AT 2SM", The Wireless Weekly: The Hundred per Cent Australian Radio Journal, 27 (19 (May 8, 1936)), Sydney: Wireless Press, nla.obj-712038814, retrieved 9 March 2024 – via Trove
^""THE MELODY LINGERS"". The Labor Daily. No. 3542. New South Wales, Australia. 13 April 1935. p. 13. Retrieved 9 March 2024 – via National Library of Australia.
^"Truth and Fiction". Sydney Mail. Vol. XLVII, no. 1204. New South Wales, Australia. 24 April 1935. p. 9. Retrieved 9 March 2024 – via National Library of Australia.